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I gave you your life.

I gave you your pulse.

I gave you your home.

I gave you your breath.

I gave you my body.

Most would say you owe me.

But that's not true.

All you need to know is that I love you






and that's enough for me.
If I were a mother...
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Mirz123 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
1-31-13 - This piece was been showcased on my profile page as today's daily feature. Thank you for making such great art.
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KassGotClass Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconshockplz: Oh my gosh, thank you! I'm sorry it took me so long to respond! I'm so flattered!
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neverfullycharged Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist
If you were a mother 'twould be the luckiest child in the world.
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KassGotClass Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love you, Riley. :love:
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neverfullycharged Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist
I love you too. :huggle:
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Mirz123 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
I am just a tad confused. The line says "Most would say I owe you." Why would the mother owe the child? Wouldn't that be "most would say you owe me?"

If you meant it that way, I totally understand. No worries. I think the poem is lovely. I remember my mother had that belief that I owed her for my life and I hated that. I would never feel that way with my own children and this poem sums it up nicely.
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KassGotClass Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are right. I shall be correcting that. :)

Thank you for your feedback and for the lovely favorite.

And yes, I feel I owe my mother too.
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writingpoetryforlife Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this
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KassGotClass Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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writingpoetryforlife Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem I feel the same way if I was a Mom too
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